Today's writing session was a fun and silly one. Writing can be fun and silly, but things that shouldn't be silly in our writing includes accurate spelling, punctuation and grammar - thanks for lesson and reminder, Mr Goodwin!
Over the next few days, Room 7 will also be writing their own "What if" experiences. Please keep an eye out for their pieces of writing - enjoy!
Wow this is excellent effort you have done Mr. N.I really like your creativity for cybersmart.What is your most favourite type of food?Keep up your good work for teaching.please don't look at mine if you find it....I'll feel guilty.
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DeleteThanks for your comments. I enjoy writing and our in-class support with Mr Goodwin has given me some cool ways to share this with other people like yourself, Room 7 and our buddies at Belfast.
You're an awesome writer too, Ocean. You have a lot of great ideas - we just need to work on the overall presentation. Luck you're in my class so I can help you :)
Regards
Mr N
PS - butter chicken and teriyaki sushi w/extra mayo and chilli
DeleteHi Zac
ReplyDeleteThanks for your comment. I'm a big Marvel fan like you. Can't wait for this one to come out.
Regards
Mr N
Hi Jennifer
ReplyDeleteThanks for your comments. I really like those suggestions, I'll keep those parked for use with my class - I think they'll like those prompts too!
To be honest, those villains were all I could think of and it didn't make total sense to bring in the biggest baddy Thanos just yet ... I'd need another three Avengers movies and more allies for that challenge.
Thanks for following our class blog.
Mr N
Hi Ritchie
ReplyDeleteThanks for your comment, I'm glad to hear this prompt has allowed you a chance to do some of your own creating.
We've got a similar attraction here called Spookers, which can also be quite scary. Random fact, you can also play paintball in a separate part of this 'haunted hospital'.
I'll try my best to get my stories uploaded :)
Regards
Mr N
Hello Mr N I like your creativity and I relate with that, free food would be nice, really nice. Also what if you received a special power to use what would you pick? Also It would help if you could say something bad will happen like for the free food there would never be any food for supermarkets. By Cody.B
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