Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Tuesday, 16 August 2022

The World's Biggest Problems

This Padlet was created to share our findings for the statement "The World's Biggest Problem". We are looking at this statement as part of our persuasive writing and reading. We discovered some very interesting facts about the world, especially some misconceptions people have about these problems. The website we used is called Gapminder. You should have a look for yourself! 



Friday, 12 August 2022

Persuasive Writing: I find it annoying when ...

This is my persuasive writing for this week about a couple of things I find really annoying. The focus was to use emotive language to persuade others to empathise or feel what I'm feeling. 

What pet peeves do you have? 

Monday, 29 November 2021

Term 4 Week 6 "Clock Out" - Water Slide and Bubble Baking

Week 6 at Ruapotaka School was so much fun! Let me tell you about a couple of really good reasons why ... 

Water Slide 

If you didn't already know, Year 7&8 are in their own bubble. One of the cool things we got to do last week was use the hill by the lower building block for a water slide. Thanks to Mr Mike for making the slide out of long, large plastic sheets, and Mrs Borough for making it extra slippery! It was complete with a sprinkler at the top and large orange traffic cones to mark the course. 

The water slide was a great end to a hardworking (and hot) week. I didn't go on the slide but it was still a lot of fun to watch the students zooming down with huge smiles on their faces. Some of them looked like the penguins on the movie, Happy Feet, with their "wings" reaching back towards their feet. Hone said "The best thing about the slide was getting soapy. This made it faster to go down the slide". 

We're crossing our fingers in hope this week that we get to visit Wero Whitewater Park on Friday, where there will be even MORE water! 


Bubble Baking 

Before our wet and wild afternoon, the Y7&8 bubble spent their morning baking. Room 7 and I made a Lolly Cake from a Countdown Supermarket recipe. Ocean and I had never made this before but it I think it's fair to say we would do so again - it was so crunchy, sweet and delicious! 

Lolly Cake doesn't require a lot of 'baking' effort. It's a rolled up mix of melted butter, condensed milk, crushed malt biscuits and chopped marshmallow Explorers. You take this magical heap and turn into a rolled log before covering in desiccated coconut. Let it cool in the fridge for a couple of hours before slicing into discs of crunchy, delectable greatness. 

Malachi brought along his Apple Cake recipe and we were able to use the leftover apples in our fruit bowl to create a second cake - how lucky were we! While our Lolly Cake was setting, we got onto our second dish. Apple cake uses some of the most basic ingredients; cinnamon, apples and walnuts are the stars in this cake. I highly recommend a couple scoops of vanilla ice cream or soft butter and a cup of tea or milo. 



Wednesday, 17 November 2021

Term 4: Welcome Back!

News Article: The Return of Ruapotaka School by J.Nevalagi 

Yesterday, primary students and teachers all over Auckland were finally allowed to return to school after their longest covid-enforced lockdown since 2020. Schools are allowed to open on a part-time basis. The rules for opening are decided by the individual school's leadership team and Board of Trustees. Ruapotaka School will be open from 10.00am to 2.00pm, Monday to Friday, to all students. This is allowed because they have a low number of students per class. 

School communities still need to do their best to follow the government's rules because Auckland is still at Alert Level 3. Rules such as social distancing, allocated spaces for play and frequent hand washing and sanitising are common practise. This is to minimise and limit everyone's possible exposure to covid. 

Most of the students who returned to Ruapotaka seemed to enjoy being reunited with their friends. The mood in classrooms and play areas was a mixture of excitement, happiness and a bit of lockdown fatigue. School lunches are still being provided by the New Zealand government. 

There are still some families yet to return. Home learning will continue for those students minus the regular online meetings. Teachers will stay in contact with those families and students. 

Ruapotaka's return was a wet one and drenched many latecomers on arrival to the school gates. This was not enough to wipe the smiles of many students who were just happy to see their teachers and classmates in person in such a long time. 


This piece was written TO INFORM (factual, formal, third-person) the AUDIENCE (Y7&8 students) in the CONTEXT of primary school students being allowed to return to school. I PRACTISED keeping third-person perspective (avoiding use of I, our, we), keeping key points in separate paraphs and using relevant detail for support. 


Description: The Great Return by J.Nevalagi 

Finally! We have returned to school. "It feels like I haven't been here for a year!" Malachi said with wonder in his voice. He was followed closely by Willie, Ocean and Renei. Our "full house" was completed when Hone turned up. I'm wearing a mask but it isn't big enough to hide the smile on my face. 

We're all buzzing. We haven't seen each other in such a long time. How long has it been since we were in the same room? The last thing I remember was saying "Good afternoon" to my class, expecting to see them the next day. Because of covid, that obviously didn't happen. 

It's only been a day but I'm already excited for what tomorrow brings. Spinning on the vortex, swinging in the swing and singing in the rain. THIS is how you celebrate being back with your friends. 


This piece was written TO DESCRIBE (emotive, informal, first-person, present tense) the AUDIENCE (Y7&8 students) in the CONTEXT of primary school students being allowed to return to school. I PRACTISED using long and short sentences, logical sequencing and capturing the mood of the moment. There's even a few language features in there. 

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YOUR TASK: DESCRIBE OR INFORM your readers of your return to school. Capture the facts and/or emotions of how you've felt coming back after such a long time. If you're happy, say so. Still nervous, you can say so too! Not feeling it? Of course you can write about. 

DESCRIPTIVE Sentence Starters 

Walking through the school gates yesterday felt like ... 

[Pick three emotions you felt the most] Laughter, joy, happiness, with a little bit of fatigue. 

I LOVED / DESPISED coming back to school. 

If I could use one word to describe coming back to school it would be ... 

Coming back to school is like ... 

Wow, what a day! 

Ugh, I'm sooo tired. Is it Wednesday already?! 

I arrived to the applause of my teacher and classmates. 

I wore my mask to protect myself and others from getting covid, however, it wasn't big enough to hide the smile on my face. 

Monday, 15 November 2021

The Best and Worst of Season 5 Lockdown

Today was a success because I was able to contact most of the families in my class. I also did most of my chores and cleaned the house before the 9.30am call. 

I am proud of myself because I had a very busy weekend driving to different shops for presents and food ingredients. I cooked a seafood chowder for the second time ever and a new potato salad recipe. Both dishes were delicious and  eye-catching! 


The BEST Parts about Season 5 Lockdown :) 

#5: Doing live cooking demonstrations with Room 7's Eggs on Toast and Pancake Stacks Friday. 

#4: Being able to spend more time with loved ones and family members, even if it was mostly online. 

#3: Enjoying "low n slow" bbq at Kohimarama beach for my birthday. 

#2: Saving money because there were no takeaways at Level 4. I also didn't have to fill the car up as much! 

#1: Sleeping in every day. 


The WORST Parts about Season 5 Lockdown :( 

#5: My school holiday was spent at home because we weren't allowed to go anywhere! 

#4: There were no takeaways at Level 4. How did we survive?! 

#3: I couldn't go to Bunnings, which also meant there were no sausage sizzles. 

#2: Whenever it rained for days on end, it was harder to leave the house and go for a walk. 

#1: Missing school and my students; being unable to teach, laugh and joke with all of them in person. 

Lastly, a reminder to the amazing students in Room 7 and at Ruapotaka School. I have enjoyed great being able to stay connected and teach you during home learning. Please make sure over the next couple of days that you are well-rested, have your uniform and materials ready for your return on  Wednesday 17 November, 10.00am - 2.00pm. 
Mutolu kia! Cheeeehuuuuuu!

Friday, 5 November 2021

Term 4 Week 3 "Clock Out"


My most grateful moment this week was R7 Eggs on Toast. I enjoyed doing something different with my class to celebrate the end of the week. It was also good to see a more positive lift in spirits this week from my class. ALSO really great to hear from Krista by email. She is doing good working on her home learning pack and trying her best with Education Perfect. I hope the rest of my class are also taking care of themselves. 

I also enjoyed playing "sock-etball" on Monday with my class. That was a cool way to start the week! 

I'm on the look out for more Fun Friday tasks we can do, so if you've got any suggestions let us know. 

Online learning: This week I took part in a few more of Mrs Allan's maths sessions. The slide deck below shows what we've been working on. One really cool site we did today was Tran Towers on Transum. It is like an online escape room. I enjoyed seeing different students help each other out to solve the questions while trying to escape the dungeon. That or watching them "break into jail" then having to sit out for 30 seconds. Be warned, this game is highly addictive! 

Room 7 "Eggs on Toast"

"Eggs on Toast: Le Menu a la Room 7" 

Malachi's Scrambled Eggs on Toast with Bacon and Mushrooms 

Pita's Fried Eggs with Sirloin Steak, Sausages, Sliced Pork and Bread 

Renei's Scrambled Eggs with Waffles  

Willie's Eggs and Coco Rice 

Mr N's Classic Scrambled Eggs 

Room 7 did things a bit differently for our Friday morning check in. We cooked eggs on toast and shared brekky in our online meeting! 

I made the classic scrambled eggs on toast with a side of spaghetti and fried bacon. I cooked my breakfast live and online with my class. Malachi and Renei shared their cooking live as well. Pita  and Willie made their meal before the meeting. 

Ms Erick from Room 6 joined us as a special guest with her can of whipped cream. We later had Mrs Hamilton join us. She missed the breakfast but is looking forward to the pics of our amazing meals. 

I enjoyed Eggs on Toast morning because it was something different and I got to see what the cooking skills of my students is like. It felt almost like being a reality TV superstar from my own kitchen. I wonder if my students felt like that as well while they were cooking? Here's what some of them had to say about our meeting: 

It was awesome. I liked seeing other people cook. - Malachi

Pita showed great patience to wait for everyone else while they were cooking because he cooked his eggs first. I also enjoyed watching other classmates cook.- Renei

I enjoyed that everyone had fun.- Pita 

Our earlier 9am was a great way to start the weekend and end a working week. We've got a couple pieces of mahi left to do for the day and we'll be back to check out in the afternoon at 2.00pm. 

Here is Mr N's recipe for Classic Scrambled Eggs on Toast: 

Two eggs and a dash of milk, whipped in a bowl. A tablespoon or two of melted butter in the pan on medium-high heat. Once the butter bubbles, turn heat down to medium and add egg mix. Use a spatula to 'pull' the egg mix in from the sides. Go twice around the pan then gently break the mix through the middle. Repeat this process another 2-3 times. Be careful not to overcook your eggs or it'll turn into rubber! Take eggs off the heat when they're about 90% done. It helps to have your toast and other sides cooked first because your eggs are best served hot of the grill! Allow remaining egg mix to combine with the cooked parts, serve hot on toast with spaghetti and bacon, with a side of orange juice. Enjoy! 




Cybersmart Trace and Copy 'Hot Dog'

Earlier this week, Mr Goodwin showed us how to do this task in one of our online meetings earlier this week. 


Attribution: Hot dog with mustard, Renee Comet. CC0 1.0. Sourced from https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/File:Hot_dog_with_mustard.png 

How to attribute an image: image title, author. License type. Sourced from [add URL]. 

This is my Google Drawing of a hot dog. In our Cybersmart lesson we learned to trace using Google Drawing tools. 

I created this masterpiece by using the Explorer tool in GDrawing to find an image of a 'hot dog'. The picture was randomly selected from a list of my favourite things. I traced the original image using the polyline tool. I "split" the image into main parts (e.g. bun, sausage, mustard) which made was easier to trace than one large object or outline. 

Something I found difficult was trying to draw Sasuke from Naruto but I kept messing up the hair.  The picture seemed easy to do but using a mousepad was really difficult for me. I reckon with a mouse, I could create some great pictures! That's no excuse no, you should see what one of my students has come up with - Pita recreated Naruto himself and he looks very authentic!  

Tracing our own images like this could be useful for trying to create and share, or to support, our own examples of learning. This term we are learning to attribute images, text and media we use; to make sure we acknowledge the help we may have used. 

Thursday, 4 November 2021

Explanation "What is a hangi?"

The writing model below is my explanation for "What is a hangi?". For those of you who don't know, hangi is an age-old Maori tradition of cooking food in an underground oven. Room 7 has been requested by Mrs T and Room 3 to explain what a hangi is and how to make one. Unfortunately with this extended lockdown, they won't be able to make one at school BUT at least we can remind our junior school what they can look forward to for their next available meal. 

This week we're explaining what a hangi is and looks like. Our next goal is to go explain the steps followed to create a traditional hangi. 

We'll put all the pieces together with some amazing pics and maybe even video - watch this space! 

I personally LOVE hangi! It's one of the best meals I've ever eaten. The food always comes out smokey flavoured (smoked, not burnt!), moist and well seasoned. An aunty of mine used to make the best stuffing, it was so buttery and full of herbs.  

What are your favourite hangi memories? 

Friday, 29 October 2021

Term 4 Week 2 "Clock Out"

My End of Week Reflection 

1) What was your win or most grateful moment this week? 

I enjoyed having a shorter week with Monday off but it seemed like we had a lot more work to do online. I am still enjoying seeing my class, even though we would all rather be at school. I am grateful that I also saw my family last night, as I haven't seen them in person for a long time #lockdown 

Today, we celebrated Freaky Friday because we will miss Halloween over the weekend. It will be different this year because we cannot go trick or treating. Big ups to Mrs Cardoza and her two scary masks and her bear-son Jayden, who turned up to our online meeting this morning. 

2) What made this week challenging? 

It has been really challenging for me to get out of bed this week. I've also got to prepare a quiz for my family tonight. If it goes well, I might play it with my students. It's Cludeo by Zoom! 

3) What's a goal for next week? 

I would really like to do some more fun and physical games and challenges with my class, something to keep them on their toes and entertained while learning something new. 

Do YOU have any suggestions for us? 

Reading - The Duel 

This week we read The Duel: Inventors Awaken by Simon Cooke. We practised locating interesting vocabulary in the text and defining what it meant. We also used our ability to locate information to support our thinking. 


R7 Blog Star of the Week: Ocean 

This is Ocean. He is an amazing writer with a clever knack for describing the world around him. He used this week's writing task to create a Wordle about a made up character. The piece below is his description about Bobby, someone experiencing a challenging moment in time but with a glimmer of hope. 

Source: Ocean

Bobby glances out of his window turning more pale by the second. He watches as rubbish glides across the wet road and past the empty paths. Bobby turns towards his bed and wraps himself in his blanket. He looks depressed after what has happened today in his life. He's petrified and scared but determined to make it through the night. He might be able to slumber through the bright sunny day. His eyes start to close inch by inch, Bobby tries to stay up longer until his eyes close shut and he starts to sleep. He awakens in the morning ready to start the day.






Tuesday, 26 October 2021

Writing: My Wordle

 

This is a wordle about me and the BEST characteristics which make up my personality. I enjoyed making this wordle because it was a fun way to play with words and learn some new words about myself. 

It is good to have a positive view of ourselves because if you're happy, then you are more likely to push yourself to do things which are fun or can be challenging. Last week's Cybersmart challenge was a difficult one but we all learned something new and how to cope if things don't go your way. For example, we couldn't find the license details for all the images we wanted to use, so we did a generic attribution to the original source. 

Something new I learned from doing this task is learning how to use Wordle and how to find vocabulary about myself. 

The challenging part for me was adjusting the size of my name to make it stand out, then having to rearrange the words so they did not overlap and look messy. 

Why don't you give it a go! 

Friday, 22 October 2021

Room 7 "Clock Out" for Term 4 Week 1

Welcome back! 
Fakaalofa lahi atu kia mutolu oti! Welcome back to our first week of home learning in the the last term of the year. We were online since Monday and officially started our home learning on Wednesday. We've managed to get 7 of our 12 students back online and I hope we're able to get more numbers after Labour Day weekend. 

I have enjoyed seeing my students after a two-week break and hearing what they've been up to. Given we're still at Alert Level 3, we are limited to where we can go. Students have mostly kept safe in their bubbles playing with their families. 

This term is also the last term for our Year 8 students Pita, Jairus and Sonny as they head off to high school next year. I look forward to making it a really memorable one for them! 

One thing we have all enjoyed is the social aspect being online gives us. Whanaungatanga, an ability to stay connected. 

Room 7's Blog Star of the Week 
Meet Pita! He has been a great advocate for sharing his learning online and displayed great enjoyment being reconnected with his classmates. Head over to his blog and see the amazing learning journey he has been on this week, as well as during the school holidays. Malo aupito, fakaaue lahi ma lou! 


Niue Language Week 
This week was Niue Language Week. I was proud to celebrate this with my students because I am from Niue. Each day this week we watched a different video about Niue island, culture and our favourite - food! After each video, I quizzed my students on their "niu" knowledge. We also had a couple of Kahoot! quizzes to keep things entertaining. 
The other task we worked on today was creating our own Niue posters, which were also featured on our school Facebook page. 







Reading: Maui by Andre Ngapo 
Our focus text was "Maui" by Andre Ngapo, a local story about a family who goes fishing to "recharge their batteries". Our learning intention was practising how to retrieve and use information in a text to support our thinking, opinions and ideas. This is our shared example; see also the greatness from Malachi and Renei. 

Writing and Cybersmart Challenge #25: Attributing Images 
This week's cybersmart challenge was a tricky one to complete but we definitely learned a few new tricks. It is important to attribute the work of any one else you use in your own learning, so that the original source is recognised. Failing to do so could look like you are claiming someone else's work as your own - that's not very fair, is it! 
Renei's Attributing Images Challenge

Hone's Attributing Images Challenge

Maths with Mrs Allan 
This is Malachi's learning for maths this week with Mrs Allan 

Wednesday, 29 September 2021

Room 7 "Clock Out" for Week 10 & Wall of Fame

Today is Ruapotaka School's last day of the term as the teachers use the next two days to plan Term 4. It has been a pleasure once again to be teaching Room 7. My preference is that we were all back at school but "it is what it is". 

Those who have been online have made the most of their learning opportunities as best as they could. If they weren't online, they were busy helping their families at home with cooking, chores and even just hanging out - all tasks which have been of utmost importance as we look after the well-being of ourselves and our families. 

Big shout out to those of you turned up regularly to our online meetings, and I hope those of you who have been missing are doing well at this time and staying safe in your bubbles. 

"I look forward to not being in lockdown and I'm really hoping we get to do athletics next term. I'm also looking forward to seeing all of my friends again" - Malachi 

"I look forward to stopping my classmates from saying '21' and getting them to say 'lua sefulu tasi' instead" - Pita  

The learning example I have shared below is a writing task we did today to celebrate the end of our term 3 and the great things we have accomplished. 

This is important to me because we should always celebrate our successes, no matter how big or small. This task was also a really good way to point out the people who have had a positive impact on our learning and achievement. 

To the students in Room 7, enjoy the break and be safe in your bubbles. Be sure to capitalise and maintain the awesome progress you've made in home learning by making sure you at least revisit and practise some of the new skills you have attained during this term. Keep up your reading, writing and basic facts practise! 

Kia manuia

Mr N 


Friday, 24 September 2021

Room 7 "Clock Out" for Week 9

Welcome to the Room 7 "Clock Out" for Week 9

Use this time now to complete the following: 

#1: Friday PM Learning Logs

#2: Create a new blog post sharing something amazing you have done this week 

What are you sharing? 

Why is this important to you? 

Don't forget to add your digital learning object (see mine below) 

#3: Have a crack at the memes from this week's planning doc.  

If you've done all of the above, go leave some lovely comments on the blogs of our mates in Belfast School, Ruapotaka or otherwise. 

Done that? Awesome! Go and find your "secret object" and get ready for Fun Friday! 



What are you sharing? 

The following examples are from Malachi, Renei and Hone and their writing and maths. 

Why is this important to you? 

These pieces are important to me because they have shown commitment and dedication to their learning. 

For writing, Malachi improved his ability to add detail to his paragraphs. He also used interesting vocabulary. 

Renei also improved her story-writing ability. 

Hone did really well in a maths lesson online as showcased by the comments from Mrs Allan. 

Wednesday, 22 September 2021

Week 9 Update: How Maui Slowed the Sun, Area and Perimeter of Rectangles and 30-second news

The following examples of high effort learning are courtesy of Malachi, Pita and Sonny. Click here to see some more of our "Quick shots of Learning" which happen throughout the week.  

For maths today, Malachi, Sonny and I worked on finding the area and perimeter of rectangles. We worked together using Transum at Level 1. 

We've also been kept up to date with R7's 30-second News. 




Yesterday, we started our narrative writing by retelling of "How Maui Slowed the Sun". Our goals for writing included using narrative structure and adding relevant detail to our key ideas. This lesson was inspired by a Maori artist who uses sand and an illuminated lightboard to create uniquely interesting and Maori-inspired artwork to tell a story. 



Monday, 20 September 2021

Cybersmart Challenge #23: Scams and Phishing

Here is my example for the latest Cybersmart Challenge, how to avoid scams and phishing. 

According to CERT NZ, Phishing is a type of email scam. The sender pretends to be a trustworthy organisation — like a bank or government agency — in an attempt to get you to provide them with personal information, particularly financial details.

What did I learn? Scams and phishing can be harmful to internet users if we are not careful. Scammers try to gain your personal information either for monetary gain, or to steal your identity. These could be used to impersonate you both online and in person. 

Why is this important to me? I wouldn't like it if my personal details were gained to be used either against me, or for someone to impersonate me. 

Friday, 17 September 2021

Te Wiki o te Reo Māori: Whakatauki

Whakataukī (proverbs) represent the wisdom guiding the Maori culture. 
They are commonly used as inspirations in speeches and also as gentle reminders spoken to each other in everyday life. They are poetic expressions of wise sayings which allude to symbols native to Aotearoa.

Kia ora whanau! The following example and instructions are one of this week's writing tasks, which also links very well to te wiki o te reo Maori and our own hauora. 

You have to select a whakatauki you resonate with, what it basically means and describe how you show this in your own life. What is a whakatauki you can relate to? 


Tuesday, 14 September 2021

Cybersmart Challenge #22: Empowerment

Empowerment is defined as the "authority or power given to someone to do something". 

This challenge advises students what they should do when they encounter comments on their blog posts, emails or documents which may not be positive, helpful and thoughtful; comments which could make us feel hurt or not safe. 

It is important that you do not reply to these messages. Take a screenshot, include the URL of your post or document and email these to your teacher. 

Room 7
What should you do when you receive comments which are not positive, helpful, thoughtful?  
What's something important that you learned from doing this challenge? 

Friday, 10 September 2021

Term 3 Week 7: Room 7's Home Learning

Room 7 30-Second News: Our news brought to you by the voice recordings of Room 7! Check for "Term 3 Week 7"

Room 7 Maths Slide Deck: This week, my class have been learning about gradients and algebra with Mrs Allan. They were clever enough to also explain to me what exactly they had been doing. Check out the first couple of slides below. 

Room 7 Reading Slide Deck: This week we practised identifying the meaning of words in the context given, and explored why "texting is better than talking". Would you agree? 

Room 7 Writing Slide Deck:  We went on a "Musical Adventure" this week, listening to different songs and identifying the different emotions, memories and feelings we associate with each song. It was a challenging one for my class because it wasn't what they usually listen to. Did you know, music we enjoy that is uplifting and enjoyable can help us when we're feeling down about things? 

Monday, 30 August 2021

Term 3 Week 6: Monday Home Learning

We have started this week on a very positive note with lots of quality learning happening. We were online in video meetings a lot more as a class with two check in sessions and two workshops for writing, reading and maths. One meeting merged very well into the next. 

Whether we're at home or school, I'm trying to teach my students to use the following phrases while learning:  

What am I learning? 

Why am I learning this? 

How do I know when I've learned this?

What were my success and challenges today? 

In each of our literacy and numeracy classes, we will be starting our own records for learning by using Google Slides. Most of my students did not have their books with them on the last day we were at school so we've had to find another way to track our learning. The example slide decks below are my examples to students how they can track the progress, successes and goals of the learning during Level 4. 

Writing: We have some very descriptive pieces about the takeaways we're missing written as 50-word stories. 

Maths: This week, we are revisiting how to use our multdiv basic facts to find fractions of a set or number.